Даже с моими знаниями английского заметил ошибок. На будущее:
What have you done - это вопрос. Правильно - What you have done.
Personally, I think it’s a great reflection of community overall perception regards well-known, however reworked heroes. - набор хреново связаных слов. Получше - Personally, I think it’s a great reflection of community's overall perception that regards well-known, but reworked heroes.
So, I kindly ask you to take into account that magic casts looking like laser beams are surely not the advantage of the upcoming game - с временами и вообще порядком слов проблема. Получше - So, I kindly ask you to take into account that magic casts look like laser beams and of course aren't the advantage of the upcoming game.
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